Formal quality of diagrams and structural elements are pleasing. The hand rendering gives a personal tone, as does the copywriting. Greg, what are some ways in which the typography can embody this tone more? Currently I don't feel the text and image working together (or helping each other to communicate).What motifs are essential to set the tone and tell your story? And as curator, what is your story about this key collection? Tell me your intentions.
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